Found poem
I found these suggestions for the title of my novel ‘Daughters of Messene’… They felt like a poem – an homage to my Greek novel
when lips and skin remember…
playing it two doors
becoming smoke
it’s being played
the fat rain
the lanterns rock
I am in this song
in this song
the tears of the North wind
the unwept
sweet Life
speak, Immortal One,
and tell the tale once more in our time.
and tell the tale
a new beginning
but still I long
making black eyes
small balls of candle wax
life to you
the suitcase goes a long way
You made the right choice! Terrific novel with a specific title. Happy year of the pig!
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Oink oink… although I’m a tiger I think! Yes, I agree, I am thrilled with final title.
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